Worldbuilding feedback

Hi. I’d like to thank my very first customer review on Amazon. A very generous 4/5 stars. I’ve taken into consideration the lack of well crafted worldbuilding in my story and will correct this. I have many documents dedicated to lore, but failed to communicate this information through a fun a narrative. I hope the second edition will fix the issue. I’ve already begun adding a story that should explain how AMA’s function and the bond between the magic user. At the same time, I want this new story to be informative as it is engaging.

I’ll be going over my story to better explain some details, while keeping certain others a cool mystery. If there was anything about my story you wanted better explained, please let me know.

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